Twilight Hollow

the story continues

I'm gradually working my way through the original story, tweaking things here and there. That's why updates are taking a little longer for this one. I'll be working on it fairly regularly now though.

It's not much yet but I'm continuing on from where you were up to.

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Someone was shaking her. Chris' whole body ached, though a cool breeze tickled her face, distracting her from the pain. She tried to open her eyes, but found her lids too heavy. A faint mumble escaped her lips as foreign hands moved around her. She felt her body being lifted easily into someone's arms. The girl did not know what happened next as she drifted in and out of consciousness, feeling only the pain within her, and oncoming chills.

Then there was softness beneath her, as she was lowered to the ground. More hands moved around her, loosening and removing her clothes. She moaned a weak protest but could do nothing. Swathed in cold she began to shiver hard. The darkness finally took her and she felt no more.

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